This is my first real attempt at self-promotion. I am sending this email promo to 1,200 art buyers and creative buyers, based on who actually opens it and clicks through my website they will get a postcard from me. So I would like some feedback from the storyboard community.
Let me know your thoughts. Should I have some of my shopper marketing stuff on top, since that is a majority of what I do, and I feel like that's my strong point?? Anyway, here is the first draft.
I think its a nice start, Kristen - it certainly shows your strengths... but the overall design is a little ... quiet... for my tastes. I'd love to see more excitement. You know, come to think of it, even the people's faces you show don't show excitement. maybe some other shots of those typical super-happy advertising people?
ReplyDeleteHey Leif,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the feed back, it is greatly appreciated, and I totally agree. I will revise and repost.